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A ghost Story
It was at a cold night at london. The most of the people are sitting in their houses and wacht tv. But Marvin Backer, an englisch Police officer, he have to stay are longer in the office because an women had an accident she died at the way to the hospital. He have to edit the accident he looks at the picture of the women, it was an young beutiful women with long golden hair : “So a pity,” thougt Mr. Backer. When he was finisched he goes out and closed tha police office off. Now he walks down the street and thougt over his live. How he have to to pay therent. The Bank give him only one week. He looks around and see some people, some of them walks, like him alone other walks in little groups notihng whats are really interest. But suddely he saw something whats are looking intersst for him, it was a little goldden-pocketwatch. He put it off an have a long close look at the clock on the back of the clock was somethin engraved on the first look he don´t realize it do he bring it nearer at the streetlam. Now he can read it their are two literal: M.D. He put it in his pocket an walks again. At the next day he was in the policecenter again and he had the pocket clock forgott. But suddely he remeber himself at it he grasp in his pocket and put it on his table. He activetat his PC and looks if somebody lose a pocket clock and really yesterday someone called the police he lose his pocket watch. The name of them ws Mirada Dullin on Evergreen-street 13. He takes the Phone and called the number who stand by the name but nobody goes on the phone so he wants to drive after the work to the adress. At 5 p.m he go out of the policeappartment and go to his car and drives to the adress. During he drive it began to rain. When he arrive at the adress he saw a big old house he drives the long entry along. On the garten are standing some scary and curios figures on their bodys are a lot of old green moss. As he was in front of the door he rise out of his car he worn his car and walks the stairs up. When he press the bell their comes an loud sound out of the old house an old man oppend him and question him: “Sir you have took the bell, what can i do for you?”. The officer sat: “lives her an Mrs. Miranda Dullin?” He ask him if he wants to go in because the rain begans stronger to shall. The man don´t wait all to long and steppet in. He question the old man again:”Lives Mrs. Miranda Dullin her yes or no.” “She has lived her but it for a long time, she died for over 4 years,” a cold shower goes over the back of the police officer “she died for over 4 Years ago but wye i found yesterday this pocketclock,” he get out the clock. “This clock was the favorit clock of Mrs. Dullin, a snacher had it stollen for over 5 years Mrs. Dullin searcht it till her dead she took a big reward of the man that bring her the clock back. Befor she died she chagen even her Testament so that the man that found the clock and brin it her back got all waht she possessed. Man now you are a really rich man.” The officer can´t belice this he have to sit his down.
Look this is a picture of Mrs. Dullin the officer looks at the picture and became frightened terrible. The women of the picture was a young women with long golden hair. It gave no doubts this was the women from the car accident. What was happend. The man thought yet often at the Night.
Now he lived in the old house and he really happy about that what was happend.
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Moonwish schrieb am 2010-03-20 15:48:56:
Ich habe mir das jetzt, ehrlich gesagt, nicht durchgelesen.
Du musst aber unbedingt auf die Zeiten achten, ebenso auf zB. "an woman". Hier stört das N.
War zu anstregend, das mit Fehlern zu lesen.
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