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Not blind

von LynxX

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When I walk out there
I see so much truth behind the lies
Don't close your mind it is unfair
You have to see how that child dies

Can't you see the darkness?
I've seen so often how a heart breaks

Listen to the noice
Hear this yelling broken voice
Crying mothers afraid of fear
Fathers not able to weep a single tear

We are not blind I know
Dont want to see it though

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Kommentare

Milka schrieb am 2009-01-23 19:40:03:
The Poesie is really nice...but to the others which here wrote something..its possible that the Grammar is not really right but i think it doesnt matter because everybody understand what she try and want to say...so dont care about it...it is nice...thats the most important thing...she try it... jojo schrieb am 2008-01-29 20:24:40:
ist echt süß nur verstehe ich nett ich habe in englisch aber eine 1 plus plus plus mit ein stern layal schrieb am 2007-11-12 18:41:59:
hahahahh leute muss man auf englisch antworten??? also ich sag mal so echt süß was du geschrieben hast und es stimmt auch noch!!! =))) Kathi schrieb am 2007-10-22 21:15:25:
ich mag dein gedicht auch^^ lass dich nicht unterkriegen mach weiter so^^
caro schrieb am 2007-02-09 16:31:55:
Sorry but your just so wrong! (to jo) this poem is written in a very nice English, but yours, I'm sorry to say, is not. It's: "that your poem doesn't work" not "don't". jo schrieb am 2006-10-21 09:41:13:
hmm may I tell you that your poem don`t be so "very good" and "very nice". Isn't it?
It is a simple fact that your english doesn't work. Let's put it this way i know what your poem says but the problem is mostly your grammar and surely the artless words you need to used.
I dont think that i can wirte a poem but i see whats good and whats bad. I just wanna help you! dont be mad okay!
Do as you would be done by. sandra schrieb am 2006-05-09 11:37:19:
nice very nice! Minni Schnucki schrieb am 2006-05-06 17:37:30:
Very good! It's very emotional and your style is great, too.
Yours,
Minni.

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